All Comments on 'Natalie'

dialogue. I hope you will continue writing.

Marvelous story about a man who substitutes a young woman he has just met for his daughter. Fantasy abounds. Fun Read! Well Written!

I must be in an incest mood or something tonight, because this naughty tale of a man having a fling with a girl that pretends to be his 19 year old daughter really excited me. Mind you, he was cheating on his wife, which is a guilty aspect of it, but it's still a hot story. The only problem with this stroke piece is that he goes from ass to pussy without washing in between, which can give a girl a UTI. Dealing with my fiancee's own UTI right now makes this flaw a real turn-off. Even so, it was still a great story. I give it a 4. Correct that detail and he can get a 5.

Nice interweaving of multiple genres: convention sex, incest, mature, anal, etc. Looking forward to more!

loved it- many erotice elements- anal incest toys.

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