All Comments on 'Naughty Naughty: Night 01'

I liked the animal way he took her, or did she take him? They both seemed 'masters of the game', and it produced a very hot story, written very believably. Keep stories of this quality coming, please?

Cindee, what a wonderful story. Well told, and very, very hot. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Cindee, what a wonderful story. Well told, and very, very hot. Thank you for sharing your talent.

This was raw and hot and god I think I came twice!!! This was perfect fantasy fodder. Both people going after what they wanted. Unbridled passion and savagery. Definitely reading the next installment!!!

This story has a lot of potential..but the use of random caps and the incorrect spelling of "tongue" as "tounge" can kill the heat in a story before you can say 'fuck'...Other than that, 'twas a great tale..

CinDee,

Very hot story. I particularly liked the descriptions and when she had her head and shoulders hanging off the bed. Made me cum big time!!! You write very well, interesting but would like to see a bit more intrigue.

That's my girl! I wonder, is there any "truth" to this? Hmmmm....