by Brian6588
seemed totally unattainable until the night after graduation-when I found her at a local establishment with the hood of her car up- we got both her and her car started that night- I have tried many times to put that night into a story without success
An enjoyable read as it remind me of my crushes at school, even though - as for most people - it did not end in sex but just admiration and masturbating to MILF phantasies with youg female teachers. Anyhow: you got tenses mixed up there, present tense and past tense, also in the end you get Mrs. Johnson and Mrs. Clark mixed up, apart from that it was good.
I Really liked the story, there were several spelling errors and a wrong name at one point but it was easy enough to follow the story, which was good...4 stars!!
Good story, but couldn’t read till the end. Too many mistakes. Yeah, I’m one of those grammar freaks