All Comments on 'Nearly Fucked, or First Fuck?'

Yes it is true. Your first time was with him on your friends bed and hopefully wasn't your last with him either.

Johnny.

Wonderful deflowering story

It’s great to hear that you had a great time losing your virginity like that. The story was well written, the right length and had some fantastic descriptions of how you did the “dirty deed”!!! Bravo, let’s now hear more.

Brings back memories of my first time in the back seat and many more visits to other back seats!

Your description allowed me to build a vivid picture of you and your experience in my imagination which I really enjoyed although it didn't make me as horny as I would've liked! Looking forward to reading your next story.

Great yarn! Thanks for sharing!

Very nice first tale, you did a great job letting us know how you felt about everything as it was occurring. I will be reading your other stuff now. I discovered you in a comment on a LW story today, and that intrigued me and so motivated me to go to your profile, and then this story. Nicely done. And the pic of you, wow, you must be popular with the men at the swing clubs.

To Patillie,

Thanks for the kind words, I know my writing is not as good as most on Lit. but I am recounting from real happenings, so I do have that in my favour. Hope you like my other stories.

Nice story. You're wrong, however, about one thing: your writing is good. It is much better than that of most writers on this site. Keep it up. You're on your way to being one of the best. (Also, really nice photo.)

On the contrary, you show a good understanding of developing the story with descriptive characters and keep the flow going with letting your reader know what you felt throughout the tale. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. That is a good picture of you and it makes it easier to see you in the story situations. I have been in swinging groups myself, but I'm in the US so I won't be seeing you anytime soon.

Loved how you set up the story! Can't wait to read more:-)