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"Yep, you are right, the last virgin form our group is a virgin no more! Tatty was really good, I enjoyed it loads, I even came!"
"You came on your first time? I'm amazed and jealous," said Lynn looking at Kevin meaningfully.
Ever the gentleman Tatty walked me home, a quick kiss and into the house for me. Of course I saw Tatty many more times out and about with our group, but we never had sex together again.
- COMMENTS
Campus774 months agoOn the contrary, you show a good understanding of developing the story with descriptive characters and keep the flow going with letting your reader know what you felt throughout the tale. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. That is a good picture of you and it makes it easier to see you in the story situations. I have been in swinging groups myself, but I'm in the US so I won't be seeing you anytime soon.
theVikingSailor6 months agoNice story. You're wrong, however, about one thing: your writing is good. It is much better than that of most writers on this site. Keep it up. You're on your way to being one of the best. (Also, really nice photo.)
SexyShelover 1 year agoAuthorTo Patillie,
Thanks for the kind words, I know my writing is not as good as most on Lit. but I am recounting from real happenings, so I do have that in my favour. Hope you like my other stories.
patillieover 1 year agoVery nice first tale, you did a great job letting us know how you felt about everything as it was occurring. I will be reading your other stuff now. I discovered you in a comment on a LW story today, and that intrigued me and so motivated me to go to your profile, and then this story. Nicely done. And the pic of you, wow, you must be popular with the men at the swing clubs.
