All Comments on 'Nectar'

by Nils Huim

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darkdance69darkdance69over 6 years ago

So it was all a fantasy? Most of the story was great but the ending was a letdown, and the beginning was confusing as well. I thought maybe it was an unanounced sequel to another story since we joined the action midstream. Everything seemed rushed and the characters undeveloped. Lots of promise though. I gave you 4 🌟's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more

More please a good start

boatbummboatbummover 6 years ago
Like darkdance69 Says

This was going great until the ending. So many directions this could have gone other than the one you chose.. Cost you a star....

doug_noughtdoug_noughtover 6 years ago

I won’t repeat what the others said about the ending, but despite that, this is a great, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good

The ending was a surprise and a bit of a shock. But that ended the story. There won't be a chapter 2. So okay. Well done.

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