All Comments on 'Needful Ch. 01'

Great story, yes so many directions this can go, her friend and with his friends too. I would like to read more, please keep them coming.... thanks

plz keep that story going for awhile.i like how you have the tie in with the mature.two of my favorites

bad bad writing, who is the main voice? Tim or the mother? switching back and forth is confusing. Crappy writing = 0

Contrary to the idiot who posted the "crappy story" comment (obviously the "expert" has never heard of third person omniscient point of view), this is an extemely well-written rendition of a familiar plot. My only suggestion for revision would be to add a bit more dialogue during the sexual encounters...some well-placed sighs, moans, and whispers coupled with Mom's imploring Tim to cum inside her...well (IMHO), it adds to the eroticism. Thanks for the story!

It's a great story with the potential for a lot of chapters. Just keep it going don't worry about pleasing everyone remeber even writers like Stephen King can't please everybody.

This story was loving, erotic and complete. So many stories seen to leave the reader hanging and unsatisfied. Bravo!

I really loved this story. My father was an executive who had to travel a lot. When I was a teen-ager, my mother used to crawl into bed with me. Nothing ever happenned except that I would get a huge boner which I tried to keep hidden and I felt really guilty. I didn't know what to do.

That was forty years ago and I wish I had read this then.

Nookiehunter