All Comments on 'Needs and Weeds'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

sooner or later Jim has to find out about Marty

SWIM21SWIM21over 6 years ago
Please continue

I want to see the fallout from this train wreck. I want Jim to punish his mother emotionally as well as sexually. She needs to feel ashamed of herself for taking advantage of him and his friend, which is what she did. She fucked them without caring about the consequences, and she needs a reality check. A good hard spanking and getting fucked up her slutty ass might help too.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...