All Comments on 'Negative Space Ch. 12'

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
You gotta love this story!

It's got it all: suspense, erotica, engaging characters, and an unfolding of a unique shifter/vampire community bound up by an encroaching plague. The story reads beautifully. As a reader, I'm having so much fun! Thanks for putting your time into this fascinating tale.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 12 years ago
Good update.

I was able to slip right back into the story with minimal confusion, without rereading the other chapters. Keep up the good work and keep posting!

Raven_FLSTCRaven_FLSTCover 12 years ago
Thank you SO much for posting this chapter!

I've been regularly checking back to see if there were any updates and was so pleased to find this tonight. It was easy to slip back into Lana's story and I love seeing her and Theo back together. I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next. Keep up the great work!

ToadenToadenover 12 years ago
Wow

I read a whole lot since I don't really have a life right now...lol yeah that sucks but oh well. Anyway came up on this series and read it straight through and I have to say it is a wonderful read. Can't wait to read the next chapter and keep up the good work! Riveted completely I am! (Yoda pun intended)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ummmmm...... Okay

Okay, your story is like Meth, Crack, Heroin, Moonshine, Huff and Kush all rolled into one! I am f-ing hooked! MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE! PLEEEEEEAAAAASE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
woohoo

almost forgotten this story but its all coming back now. thank you! :)

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Wonderful

I am so glad to see a new chapter. This is such a good story!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Missed It

I have really enjoyed this story from the start and to have missed a chapter, I don't know how. But I am so glad to have found it and now just want more. With every chapter you have continued to build the storyline. I want to know what the next big surprise is?

I will be keeping my eyes out for the next chapter, yes eyes, both of them. I don't want to miss another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please!!!!

Very well written and love every second of the story line, but i need the next installment :P I'm becoming addicted :D

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 10 years ago
WOW!

This is a wonderful story!

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