Negative Space Ch. 12

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"Absolutely. My pack actually has an entire department devoted to watching for rogue action in our area. They track new turnings and try to deal with the rogue and offer the victim a home. She will be welcome here until she is ready to either move on or decide to join our pack."

"Excellent! Thank you so much for your help, Elke. As always, you are a pleasure to talk to and a delight to work with. Thank you thank you thank you."

It took only a moment for me to explain the situation to Alma and only a moment longer for her to agree. It was the promise of acceptance that had been completely elusive for her since the minute that rogue decided to bite her. I decided to try one last blessing for her before she left. I was supposed to be some sort of descendent of the goddess of fertility, no? I placed my hands on either side of her full belly and closed my eyes, feeling the life between them. I felt it out carefully, and watched for any damage to the tiny being's consciousness. I almost dropped my concentration when I shocked myself by actually finding what I was looking for. There WAS damage to this little fetus, damage that had occurred during development. Most people know that folic acid is extremely important for the development for human children, but what they do not know is that folic acid is necessary because it helps to seal off the spinal cord during pregnancy. As the fetus develops it turns one single mass into the entire nervous system including the brain, spinal chord, and nerves. When the spinal chord section doesn't close off it can cause numerous life threatening or debilitating side effects.

I felt for the baby's nervous system, and magically I could see it glowing in perfect relief. I let myself follow through to the damaged out-pouching of nervous tissue, which I covered with and pressed on with my Khrusos, as I was beginning to think of it. The golden lava that sat at my core—that was my healing power, THAT was my magic. The injury to the spinal cord shrank and shriveled, and finally it was gone. I sighed. What a miracle that I was able to do this for her!

"Whoa!" Alma shivered. "That really felt funny. Did you do something to my baby?"

"I just fixed a little problem she was having developing. I'll explain it all to you at your next appointment, which is next week, okay?"

"Okay."

"Don't forget! I'll be waiting for that appointment. I want to hear what it's like at the pack compound."

"Oh don't you worry, I'll keep you updated on ALL the gossip," Alma laughed.

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superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 10 years ago
WOW!

This is a wonderful story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please!!!!

Very well written and love every second of the story line, but i need the next installment :P I'm becoming addicted :D

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Missed It

I have really enjoyed this story from the start and to have missed a chapter, I don't know how. But I am so glad to have found it and now just want more. With every chapter you have continued to build the storyline. I want to know what the next big surprise is?

I will be keeping my eyes out for the next chapter, yes eyes, both of them. I don't want to miss another chapter!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Wonderful

I am so glad to see a new chapter. This is such a good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
woohoo

almost forgotten this story but its all coming back now. thank you! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ummmmm...... Okay

Okay, your story is like Meth, Crack, Heroin, Moonshine, Huff and Kush all rolled into one! I am f-ing hooked! MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE! PLEEEEEEAAAAASE!

ToadenToadenover 12 years ago
Wow

I read a whole lot since I don't really have a life right now...lol yeah that sucks but oh well. Anyway came up on this series and read it straight through and I have to say it is a wonderful read. Can't wait to read the next chapter and keep up the good work! Riveted completely I am! (Yoda pun intended)

Raven_FLSTCRaven_FLSTCover 12 years ago
Thank you SO much for posting this chapter!

I've been regularly checking back to see if there were any updates and was so pleased to find this tonight. It was easy to slip back into Lana's story and I love seeing her and Theo back together. I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next. Keep up the great work!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 12 years ago
Good update.

I was able to slip right back into the story with minimal confusion, without rereading the other chapters. Keep up the good work and keep posting!

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
You gotta love this story!

It's got it all: suspense, erotica, engaging characters, and an unfolding of a unique shifter/vampire community bound up by an encroaching plague. The story reads beautifully. As a reader, I'm having so much fun! Thanks for putting your time into this fascinating tale.

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