by kaliandy24
Pity you did not spend more time in college learning proper English spelling and grammar...
The firrst in the series was good with intrigue, mystery and allure. Perhaps too rushed, or lacking in a plot this time. Redo/rework, or something. Thank you.
Poor pacing, poor grammar. No plot. The girl is dumb as rocks. Not even remotely realistic, even as far as erotica goes.
i loved your story!
people love to be negative, and be anonymous.
i hope you decide to write more, if not just for me!