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jimjam69over 3 years agoNot that interested in female to female. Down rated from 4 or 5 to average because of Becky's plan to turn her into a full time whore/slut for the whole fucking neighborhood including men women and teenagers. Does this sound like a friend or lover? She should do whatever to break this bond and leave or she will become something she really doesn't like.
Hornyoldwoman947almost 4 years agoLoved the story and I definitely want to see you continue. I'm wondering if Becky was domme to the women who came for coffee and possibly some of the men? It certainly sounds like a great neighborhood to live in. I would really enjoy finding out how Becky "worked" things out and how Laura reacted. I hope you let your creative juices flow with more of the story.....much more story. Wow. So many adventures are just waiting to happen.
Mag863almost 4 years agoReally wonderful story, very captivating and interesting. Definitely would love to see more parts of the story if you are up for writing more. As another person said, I too would love to see more of Becky disciplining Laura, and maybe the other wives will learn from Becky. The possibilities are quite grand where you could take Laura too, and have her experience. Please keep up the great work.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoGreat start hope you continue the story line. A chapter on the wives learning how to discipline her under Becky's instruction so she will perform when sent to the neighbors. So many ways to take this storyline. Keep going
bucco40almost 4 years agoWould like to know how Becky got all the neighbors to go along with her to use Laura. Is she the Domme to them all?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoYou've started this off excellently. Please continue. Sounds like my own adventure
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI know you said you don't read comments from anonymous but I thought I would say I am sorry that the first part was over. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next part. I had to give it 5 stars because that is as high as it goes.. Thanks for giving us your talents. Pappasleaze!
