All Comments on 'Neighbors Across the Park Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Interesting

I loved the plot line at beginning it kinda lost it towards the end which i thought was a shame, i think them getting caught would of been an interesting prospect. i think adding freds sister at the end it kinda ruined it for me i would of liked to see a diffinate ending

But i really did love it (:

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