All Comments on 'Neighbors Sissy Son Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Keep them cumming!!!!!!!!!!!

divergurldivergurlover 6 years ago
Rushing the story makes it unbelievable

Making it fake and unrealistic by rushing the scenes. Would be one of the best in here is you made them longer and got into them and your characters. No one passes out long enough to get a fist in their ass for the first time that quickly. Where is the lube? Don't care how cool a mom she is. No one wakes up after passing oti and says nothing to find her son dressed as a girl, in makeup, getting fucked, and fingering their moms ass and she says nothing. Say he never Tiffany around his mom yet dresses as her while she is home and talks to her like that before leaving. Se xscenes are excellent but with more foreplay and longer be so much better. Also, taping his mom and daddy and selling the tapes without consent is major illegal and mom is submissive or a slut. Sluts don't have masters submissives do. Sluts and submissives are not the same

newfield1981newfield1981over 6 years agoAuthor
Divergurl

Wow really? Ok one character development was done in ch.2. Two this whole story is only ment to be a stroke fest not a novel. And three this Ch was written for one of my readers who asked me to please make the mother and sissy get fuck by Daddy at the same time. The real essence of this story is how little Tiffany is smarter than everyone around her. No matter what happens she always gets what she wants. If I wanted to make this more realistic then I would have written her getting bullied and picked on in school, and who needs that? Did you even read the first two chapters? As far as the whole sluts vs submissive thing your right and I abused the two words carelessly will not happen again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

i LOVED the story please keep it coming. maybe daddy and and slut mom find out about the videos and want to help further tif's sissy hood

lingerie65lingerie65about 4 years ago
Greg's introduction to mommie's rear

How I truly wish to have been tiffany during Greg's first meeting with her mother of a slut, this way I'd enjoy every sexual desire that daddy wanted fulfilled by both mother & Ms Sissy how much much more I would've given to both mommy & Greg. That a week in bed wouldn't have been enough for their recovery.

lingerie65lingerie65about 4 years ago
Dressed as Maria lingerie65

As I read this story I'm also getting dressed for my evening in my apt. With a red thong and white come fuck-me high heeled sandals I feel as feminine and sexy as a girl should, I just poured myself into a black & red summer dress with spaghetti straps and of course I'm (making me feel so naughty) braless.

Now let's get to the next slutty story

rebelraiderrebelraiderover 2 years ago
Just , ... WOW !!!

The movie , that you just put in my head , is absolutely fucking incredible . Am loving this series , so far . 5 Stars , because 6 isn't an option .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You have a gift for writing fast paced erotica of the highest order. I write and have been published there is so much mediocre lit out there, This series has me hot like a fire cracker I think it has the potential to be a erotic novel. Your character development and how you keep up the outragious taboo erotic twists and turns. Your gifted as a writer you think in pictures thats how I write and that is way all the greats create literature, That yours is of the erotic kind is no different than how Stepen King approauches his subject matter, develops chararacters and breathes life into them. Bravo my gifted friend. I think it was brilliant to move to makie Charles/Tiffany the mynx that she is. Capitalizing on submission, wanton abandoment and having the erotic time of her life. If you only knew what I have whirling around in my head. I can't wait to read more of your work. I do have a question who are you in the great scheme of things. How much is fiction and how much is based upon experience or the desire for such.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago
Love ass to mouth

Love when i have more than one cock fucking my ass and mouth i remember going to tampa dressed in my cross dressing sluttie whore cloths and going to the adult book store and being gang banged by 5 guys taking turns on my man pussir and having the one after another fuck me and pull out tonslam thair cocks straight down my throat i had two cocks once in my mouth and unload so much hot cum i could not swall all of it and than thay made me clean every drop off thair cocks and the ground and than thay took turns spacking me and beating me with thair long black cocks i was so sore and brused had cum all over me and i had to walk home like that iam such a whore this old guy called me and asked me to blow him and his friends in the bar turns out it was a cop bar thay fucked me for hours and left ne fall a sleep on the pool table tied toneach corner and the window blinds were wide open in the morning a for all to see me at my glory what a night what a slzt i am

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien4207 months ago

Dang that was fucking hot. I need a hot mom with a sissy son to fuck and play with.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Fantastic stuff! All that's missing for me is Mom and Tiffany smoking for us. Huge smoking fetish here, can you add some to your future efforts?

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

Apsalutly awesome 😱🤣🤗🤗🤗

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