by Voboy
An outstanding tale of the wonder of the mysteries of olden times. I'm glad he's back in the ground and I'll always wonder if Cassie and James ended up together. I expected that info in the epilogue. Not the sexiest story on Lit, but a great read. Thanks for taking the time to make me part of the story.
A grand ripping yarn, loved it and worthy of a 5.
Having friends in and around Caerphilly and been all over Wales the story conjures up a sense of believable happenings. Well done mate...Should be a film with Hugh Grant as the Vicar !
Just amazing writing! Thank you so much for writing and thank you, too, for sharing your work.
A stirring take about the dangers of global warming. Thank you for shining a light on this unforeseen consequence of prolonged drought.
The other commenters have said it better than I can. Great opening hook. Splendid pacing. Terrific dialogue. (The way Cassandra needles Norris and the angry cop with the details of what she and Davey did in the church is hilarious and a brilliant touch.) Five stars aren't enough. One of the best stories I've read in this category and on this site. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Absolutely terrific story. I loved everything about it - the characters, the pacing, the plot twists, and the writing. Thanks for a fun adventure.