All Comments on 'Nemesis'

Very well done!!

Erotic and weird with a creepy atmosphere. Nice buildup too and a great conclusion. Like it.

Sexy, creepy, and exciting! Nicely done!

A well-told story makes the most unbelievable situations seem completely possible. Great story!

That was eerie and very cool -

She turned her talent for evil to do good rofl - no shit - what a mind fuck -

Neat concept well executed -

What a story! I started reading and thought it was just a silly story, but I couldn't stop reading. I had to find out where you were going with it. It was also enjoyabvle to read a story about a man who loves his wife and wants to remain faithful and is just a good person. It was very imaginative and well written. I like story that are "outside the box" and this one was definitely different.

Good Job!

This story is worthy of a Stephen King. Excellent!

Definitely a contest winner, if only there was a LIT contest for great stories.

Most niggers ain't good for much but raping woman and stealing shit.

Giving the rest of us hommys a bad name.

Ever thought of turning this into a graphic novel?

Gothic horror. Egdar Allan Poe would be so proud. Would have liked to have seen a netflix series on a female erotic serial of 'Death Wish'. A really nice original plot. Nothing like it precedes it although the theme seemed familiar. Kudos to the Author, sir.