by StorieCap
I love the Sci-Fi angle and you have a solid premise. Having your characters (esp the wife) become more debauched and insatiable as a result of feeling the sensations of her partner is very novel and interesting. There are a few writing errors but nothing that detracts from the experience!
I only wish that the story didn’t end when it did :D There are so many places to go with this concept. I’d even be curious to know if the fiercely intelligent wife managed to hack or modify the device somehow :)
Anyways - good work.
Does this really belong in this category when it's so evident what the actual kink in question is?