All Comments on 'Neuro-Linked Pt. 01'

by StorieCap

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Good idea, keep it up

I like the concept, keep it up.

Kyriel_02Kyriel_02over 2 years ago

I love the Sci-Fi angle and you have a solid premise. Having your characters (esp the wife) become more debauched and insatiable as a result of feeling the sensations of her partner is very novel and interesting. There are a few writing errors but nothing that detracts from the experience!

I only wish that the story didn’t end when it did :D There are so many places to go with this concept. I’d even be curious to know if the fiercely intelligent wife managed to hack or modify the device somehow :)

Anyways - good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Does this really belong in this category when it's so evident what the actual kink in question is?

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To dominate or to be dominated, that is the question. Everything that has a power dynamic or is outside the norms gets me going. Sprinkle this with a dash of romance and you have me!