All Comments on 'Neutral Green Ch. 04'

And the silent yet very effective treatment goes on, not much choice when Avery has such an impact on the poor boy. Somehow her jealousy gives her a cuter appearance and compliments her physical description. Glad to see the style didn't change, I was compelled by it from the get-go and it would be a shame if that changes in the substantial time between chapters. Him falling asleep after action now seems tone a treat in both siblings rather than just in him.

Still gave it a 5* in hopes of faster updates and more fun escapades (mostly in public).

Great the way this is going. Looking forward to the next chapter

...I spilt my coffee,in my haste to keep on reading.....yuck,messy stuff....

Thanks for another great story - do NOT stop,or I'll send some Welsh girls around.....!!

Good stuff waiting for next part

Gave it 3 stars for the simple reason its incomplete

I was enjoying the interplay between the characters and wanted to see what you were going to do with the dream sequences but that seems like it's it. So 4 chapters for a bit of oral between adopted brother and sister and no conclusion.

I would like the story to continue with your more experienced eye; where your 2 years absence should make all the difference. Hopefully there would be a lot less errors and more structure to your sentences. Carry on if you can.

Still waiting for the next chapter to your great series. Hope it comes out in my lifetime.

That all authors who don’t finish their stories on Literotica FUCKING DIED

Please finish this story