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"You're happy, now it's my turn for a little happiness," I whispered into his ear. I rubbed his back up and down as I did so many times in the past, knowing that it would comfort him.
We held each other, afraid to let go. I looked up into Caleb's watery hazel eyes and kissed his forehead and cheek in farewell. It seemed like eons, but only a couple of minutes that we stood there in each other's arms.
"I've finally found you," Stacy's voice chimed from the patio doorway.
I wanted to stab her for interrupting our private moment. I reluctantly let go of my dear friend as he stepped back.
"Hey Stacy," Caleb walked back over to the railing.
"Hi, what's wrong?" she asked. She moved over to Caleb and took a possessive hold of his hand. She looked up at him with a quizzical expression and waited for an answer.
"Nothing," I said before Caleb could speak up. "Well, I better get going. Goodbye."
I maneuvered my way past the couple and when I got to the door, I turned and looked at Caleb for one last time, standing next to his fiancé.
"Goodbye," I left the patio and my first love, without turning back.
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EbonyKitty
Too many real life stories end like this. Some try to find happiness and are successful, others aren't as lucky and remain hopelessly in love with their first. Your readers (especially this one) desperately need a happy ending. Please write a sequel.
This story of goodbye is breathe taking and I would love to know what happens. Do they get back together, does he go to London to bring him back?? Please, please continue this story.
Wow! Great story and well deserved for the friend. He needs his own happiness and life.
I am just sitting and reading and crying. this story is my exact same life :( plz give me more. i hope they reunite.
Would love to know what happens...reminds me of the fairy tales we hear "And they lived happily ever after". But what happens after?....
Hope you write more...
wow! u cant let it end this way! pls do another chapter and let them have a happy ending
Just found this story, and am disappointed that you haven't written any more.
Your dialogue was spot on, and the sensual scenes were totally believable.
Please reconsider and write more stories.......