by DAZ1989
Imaginative and skilled delivery perhaps deliberately hurried due to the setting. I sense a learning and growing taking place which is good. Confidence built slowly is a good foundation for your skills which are shown.
Take your time - have fun - continue to respect the characters and we will you as well.
with Regard
It was a great story but i can't help but feel that you could have added more detail to the ending of the story but otherwise a very good story I deeply enjoyed it.