All Comments on 'New Additions'

This is an excellent story, the conflicts running through her mind.Has she really been seen or not, will she show more--I'm really enjoying this, please continue with more?

Thankyou!

lets keep it going. Don't rush it

I could feel the tension building (in me, too) as she had that inner struggle about whether to give in to her desire to be seen, exposed. The subtlety of the story made it extremely hot. Can't wait to read more from this very talented new writer!

I liked how you started off and how you progressed.

I suppose all I was waiting for was the flash experience.

I think that will come with more stories from you.

I was excited ++ during the reading of this.

Great story so far. Don't keep us hanging for too long!

Nearly all of us are exhibitionists. Perhaps unfortunately, it's not socially acceptable behavior for the men. So they think about it, debate the pros and cons, and usually decide to keep things hidden, rather than run the risk of being ridiculed.

But women think too. Will I enjoy it? Will I be scared? Am I pretty enough? Is it dangerous? Is the excitement worth the risk? Etc.

Yet I have never read a story that allowed such an interesting glimpse into a woman's mind, as she begins to explore the idea of exposing herself. The exhibitionism of her private thoughts is more fascinating than a big flash of skin right away. Almost no one bares it all the first time, and I think what you've written, letting us see her nervousness, is great. I hope you keep showing this to us as the intensity of the adventures increases. After all, if a girl didn't have anxieties about showing off, there would be no point in her bothering to do it.

Please write more with this style. I'm so tired of the dribble about the girl who takes it all off and walks across campus without a second thought.

I like this... nice, teasing start, and where is it going to lead...???