All Comments on 'New Beginning of Eva'

by Trapper ak Bobby

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What kind of "accident"?

The only kind of accident which would reduce his sperm count would be radiation or a bilateral orchidectomy. Get real.

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Original

Interesting that you had Donnie wait a while before spying on his wife, a slight diversion from the usual formula. And also that this is shown as a single, liberating event in their sex lives, rather than the "slut wife" stereotype. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very nice

Reasonably original and believable. Well written. Good characters. One of the better reads in this group.

Don1028Don1028over 17 years ago
Personally I gave it a top score even though......

I am turned off by large cock stories this one had enough else going for it to overcome that factor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well done

Definitely one of the better stories under this catergory. Keep up the good work

don87654don87654about 15 years ago
She got relaxed and pregnant

This is not the first time that this has happened. I have some friends where she could not get pregnant so they adopted a baby. Soon after, she found out she was pregnant from her husband.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Concentrating sperm

The technology existed, well before this story was told, to store semen and administer a much larger number of sperm, at the most propitious time, to enhance the pregnancy likelihood for the low-count male! There was also 'in vitro' fertilization with sperm from Hubby, although that is more invasive!

Hard to believe that Sweetie was not willing to 'undergo' a second round a day or two later, given that it was more instructive than she expected!

checkaho013checkaho013over 5 years ago
Good

I was prepared to yell Cuckhold Shit, but it really wasn't

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