All Comments on 'New Beginnings'

Not my thing, poor little Mikey

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....but you couldn't even make that.66 yrs old and 44 inch waist,hmmm,sounds like a job for viagra man! Or just whore your wife out,whatever seems easier.LOL-pistolpackinpete

Well it wasn't the best written story of this type, but it wasn't meant to be anything more than a quick sharing of the author's fantasy. I don't understand the mean spirited remarks that seem to dog these type of stories. I knew what this story was after reading just a few sentences. I would like to see this site come up with some other way of categorizing stories so those interested in "seriously well written erotica" can leave those more interested in reading and writing wanking stories alone.

For the author of this story, take more time in writing and proofing your story. Don't depend on spell checkers. If you meant to write he and you wrote she, it can't read your mind. Also, this type of story is well used, try and come up with a unique approach and make it at least plausible.