All Comments on 'New Beginnings - Après l’Apocalypse'

Very interesting beginning!

5

SAD

The dying stab at Adam and Eve humor fell flat for me. Because the first part of the story is so possible. Any apocalyptic or dystopian fiction ever written shows it only takes a few small things to start the eventual collapse, and once the landslide starts, nothing can stop it. If the silent majority in America doesn't get their head out of their keister, I wonder who will end up being Adam and Eve. But I voted five for the courage to write a story like this, to swim against the mainstream. Thanks for the story. PS the first to start dying in an Apocalypse, are the very old, the very young, the weak and the poor. The powerful and the privileged just move somewhere better. Ugh, morbid this morning.

Good and complete as a short story.

Come on...keep this one going.