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northparkbinorthparkbiover 7 years agoAuthor

Apparently our definitions of 'erotically written' differ. To each his own.

loveloverloveloverover 5 years ago
Pleasant

Interesting sex, but hard to care too much about the characters....

northparkbinorthparkbiover 5 years agoAuthor

I never got to know them well enough to know much about them as people or characters. It would have been nice to get to know them better and flesh that part out, but they broke up shortly after.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 5 years ago
Very hot!

Thanks for a good cum.

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
a little short

but very erotic. well written. wish there had been more description of the 2 hours!!

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