All Comments on 'New Friends'

too good not to

This story was amazing! Just how i should have planned it with my now ex wife....

Thumbs up!

They should make this into a movie!

I am an easy grader! The pace of her becoming comfortable seems a bit slow, but it sells a lot better than 'wham bam!'

i enjoyed it - very much as i think it realy would happen - good story

Normally I enjoy threesome stories but found this story lacking. I found this was a story that retold an event and by retelling it, the story was boring. My feeling this is due to the lack of description, thoughts, feelings, and the need for more conversation. If you made this story come to life then I feel this would have been a remarkable story.

FETISH story

but my main complaint was that nearly all the conversation came from the two men. The wife in this story is virtually invisible as far as her character is concerned and we don't learn anything about her - other than that she likes to fuck & suck. To be really good, it needs more input from her.

Sweet bodies, feelings, shyness, closer inch by inch, all together.. keep writing!

Loved it. Sexy but respectful threesome. Next step is having the guys blow each other too