by rogue01
written by a woman, or a pussy-whipped cucky boy, either way complete crap
Excellently written, you set each scene wonderfully - There was some confusion with names but I really loved it!
Ignore the cuck comments, that gutless prick always makes them anonymously. I also got a bit lost with the names. Becky or Rhiannon? Who is who? Otherwise a solid effort and please continue.
and wants the men to suck each other off.
What a fagtoid!
1* for the cuck lovers.
Losers. Ignore them. I enjoyed the story. Keep writing, rougue.