All Comments on 'New Girl'

This story was so hot! Honestly, I love how you wrote Jasmine. It was paced well, and there was almost nothing that broke the suspension of disbelief for me... except the cherry bit. That was kind of weird. Anyway, 5 ☆'s!

I did not understand your point. She was a virgin preyed upon by these two guys, didn't want the sex but then she did. Where is this going if its going anywhere? I'm left a bit perplexed.

Desiree I understood, this not so much...

You want to grab pussy too!!!!

Idiot.

...it sucks. Yeah, some people get off on deflowering but it's just ridiculous how she cried one second and suddenly she was having best sex evaa! I mean, come on...

I liked it a lot, it was very well written and the use of imagery was very pleasing. Good job, definitely worth 5 stars!

Rape is one line I won't cross so I didn't care much for the story.

Do people read this if they don't like this kind of story?

I gave you 5 stars, I liked it. Obviously would be shit in real life but it's a fantasy. I like the kiss at the end.

Well done. Pay no attention to the anonymous compliants. Keep up the good work.

This is good!

Horrible. People who think rape is hot need to have their brains examined.