All Comments on 'New Man Pt. 01'

A very enjoyable story. Thanks!

So who does he go for? Yvonne, who was made for blowing him? Jenna, Sarah, the twins? Or Morgan, who he wants and who wants his kids? This could easily become a multi-chapter story. Thanks for writing!

This is really wonderful - sexy with substance. I want more...

Looking to continue reading this wonderful story.

Definitely looking forward to future installments. Great job this far!

She needs to dump Douglas and become Isaacs mom

Waiting on part 2... nice start!

Just wanted to say, having been divorced myself, you portrayed those feelings and emotions incredibly well. I had a conversation like the one with Morgan and it turned out the same way. It’s been twenty years and a week doesn’t go by that I don’t think of it.

If the end of this chapter is a foreshadowing of the resolution of this story, I wouldn't complain.

I will complain if there aren't many many more chapters between this one and that last one.

You've made a great start, set an interesting stage for anything from casual romps, to a protracted romance or even a harem type storyline.

It'll be interesting to see what you come up with... just don't make us wait too long. ^^

This is the best writing I‘ve seen on this site in 8 years I‘ve read here

My god, I love it. Amazingly well written and a very creative story. Deserves more than 5 stars.

I don't understand the point of him being the "bastard ex of her sister"? and somewhat hostile-ish feelings from Morgan towards him.

She needed out, she wasn't interested, etc. why is she then victimized and he is guilty of the divorce?

Other than that very nice story! enjoyed the first part

A good and intriguing start.

Re previous comment. I think he was being sarcastic when he said about being the bastard ex of the sister coz he was very much aware of the intensity of the emotions between him and Morgan. And of course everybody knows family first. Family must stick together.

I think any animosity Morgan felt was really veiled disappointment. She was already married to an arrogant prick, Douglas; and she still wanted to be with Lionel, but knew she couldn't.

Very good opening chapter Ian!!! I really like Yvonne!!!

Well written stories about fucking a great…

Well written stories about fucking…. And real relationships….. are better

Just a few mistakes, but they're VERY big... Misspelling or forgetting names, etc.

Great start. I have high hopes

I dislike the main character. Perhaps Tina wasn't the problem with the marriage. The story mentions how excited she was to be pregnant waving the positive pregnancy test. The story never says anything positive about the main character other than he has the hots for his wife's sister, that the desire was so obvious he toned it down. That his brother-in-law was terrible for going by his name of Douglas, unlike people who are forgiven for being called Henry instead of Hank, Suzanne rather than Sue, Richard instead of Dick, Kathleen instead of Kate, etc. Evil Douglas also told a Chinese joke at a Chinese restaurant which makes him a racist, and wore a tee shirt to a casual restaurant. I'm sure Doug would have been called haughty if he wore sport coat. Main character also thought it was best to move his son away from both sets of grandparents and other relatives who loved him, not to mention his friends. Was the Dad seeking a fresh start for THEM or running away himself. He banged Yvonne within 15 minutes of meeting her. Why should the reader care about the main character other than because his marriage to Tina collapsed due to mutual indifference?

Great start, think it'll go somewhere.