All Comments on 'New Man Pt. 02'

I hope there's more to this -- very promising!

Huh...some pathos with the HARD, and soft, sex...

Curious where you're going with this...

Interesting story so far...

Ian, you have a rare ability to make more complex characters and situations than is common in amateur erotica. BRAVO!

Really good, until he made reference to himself having a pu$$y (right after one of them said it).

Just enjoy Jenna for what she is. She's told you that's all she wants. Leave the ex sister-in-law alone. Bad karma there. Avon said the neighborhood was full of hotties, find them.

I love the way your characters are so very human. A lesser writer just tells us what the characters are doing, without really getting into the character’s head. Nicely done.

Kinda iffy on this so far… but your ending made it interesting.. also, I know it’s Literotica but don’t dwell on the sex so much…what sets you or anyone apart asa writer,I think, is character development( which you’ve demonstrated) and plot and situational development. Too much sex gets in the way. I’m not complaining but…just a thought from another writer.

Not sure if I like the main character, maybe it will change. A good story nevertheless.