All Comments on 'New Man Pt. 07'

I've thoroughly enjoyed your work these first 7 chapters. Every time I walk away feeling very satisfied and fulfilled with the excellent sorry planning, and characterization. I'm a long haul reader. I like to pick them up early and enjoy the pieces as they come. Keep up the exceptional work.

The relationships and people feel real.

I would never have guessed that this story would go hot just for the sex with the twins! In chapter 6 you left us hanging with no description or continuation of what happened with the baby sitter!!!

YOU LUCKY BASTARD! WHAT A FANTASY!

That title has nothing to do with the 5+ girlfriends. Nor is the aforementioned “fantasy” about the self-same ladies.

The fantasy, to my mind, is two-fold:

1. That he has an ex-wife that’s still caring and understanding.

2. That a guy can get custody of his 8-9 year old son.

Not to get too personal, but in my experience neither were within possibility. Despite my vindictive ex-wife’s history of mental illness, the judge gave her custody based solely upon the fact that she had a uterus. When my son reached his majority he chose to live with me, and we’ve been dealing with the scars she inflicted ever since.

And, regarding twins: my ex was an identical twin. Here’s a well researched truth: they learn to hate each other.

Still, your skills set quite apparent. Can’t wait to read more!

What was Tina's game in forcing Lionel to admit his feelings. Especially when she could see Douglas behind him?

I think she didn't realize at first the he was there, and when she did she kept saying his name to get his attention, and he misconstrued why. Coupled with his overwhelming need to just get it out there, to relieve the pressure inside, made what should have been a minor thing....unfortunate.

If the other parts of this story are as good as the first chapters, this is going to be a high favorite of mine.

Great reading!

Why didn't he hit back!!??

Flat out awesome from Chapter 1. The way you flesh out the world and individual thoughts and feelings is incredible!

It keeps getting better and better.

Ah man. What wicked webs man weaves. Storyline is keeping me hooked to read it all in one go. Your writing style is easy to follow along with and seems to flow naturally. Or at least not forced/stilted like some other writers on Lit.

Honestly, it's my first time reading the series. I'm kind of hoping MC ends up with either Morgan or Sarah as long term partner. The ethical harem thing is fun, though I'd have loved to see more interaction between MC's son and the different girls. He's an afterthought most of the time.

Hard to say I loved it with tears in my eyes. But you’ve captured me.