by Nakeddreams
I think you write well and the story was interesting. I do want to say I think the 'dumb-founded boy' trope is overused by erotic writers. Not all men who are articulate, even witty, are arrogant pigs, nor are all inarticulate men docile and obliging.
I know from considerable experience nudist women are very horny and sexual, and are not shy about it. :)