All Comments on 'New Realisation Leads to New Path'

I don’t normally read Lesbian stories, but I really enjoyed this storey you are such a great writer. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I agree with "Woodencav."

Wake up to see a fav author post a new story. Did not disappoint, thoroughly enjoyed it

A beautifully crafted tale. Thank you so much.

Really well done. Minor grammar and spelling here and there (like mixing to and too), but doesn't detract from a well developed story.

A new Cagivagurl story always makes me excited. Epic story. Thank you for sharing it. Randi.

I totally agree I think you really got this one right the emotions of someone exploring something totally new plus the emotions of the relationship being frowned upon by your family and friends I think you got it so right

Keep up the great work

sexy erotic with out the porn, i love your style, 5 stars

As a near hopeless romantic, I loved the discovery you crafted here — the tentativeness, the awareness emotional and cerebral, wonderment, the sensual love making. Yes, the developing relationships enjoyed some melodramatic moments but even those moments appealing. Always look forward when I see one of your posts — prose or poetry.

Happy tears! Happy tears indeed. Well done you made it work (but get a proofreader. Seriously, it can only make you better.)

Not sure how to take this one. I do like the story, but it seemed nobody could definitely decide on anything. Except Ariel, it seemed had an agenda for one particular person.

Overall a good story, a little convoluted, but a good story. The only person I felt sorry for was Skye. Just couldn’t get the in love thing straight.

Take care

This was a beautiful story. One of your best.

Great story... although the ending that served to tie the long and exquisitely detailed 10-paged journeys together ("The Reveal") was a bit abrupt at about just 1/3 the last page, and mostly about crying lol

STILL, a beautiful story, as always from you. Thanks very much.

Another wonderful story

Welcome Back. I admit I've been disappointed by your last couple of stories, they where missing that little something that makes good stories great. Happy to say that this one knocked it out of the park in spades. Not surr why those last stories didnt feel right, but very happy to see you back on form with this truly amazing story about flawed and impetfect love showing us all that sometimes it takes pain and confusion yo get to your happy ending. 5*

Like blackrandi1958 and Nicole2023 I am always excited when I see a new posting from you. All subtly different but always full of love. Thank you for making my day x

It has been sometime since I have had the time to do some reading in Literotica. I was happy to see a Cagivagurl story on the list. I always enjoy reading your stories. Thanks for sharing. 5+

Wonder if telling Mum & Dad was hard, after they had accepted Skye?

As always, it needed more than a bit of editing here and there. But I really liked the story. It felt as if it petered out at the end, but the story has to end at some point, right? Well done.

Brent was absolutely right to dump Kasa. It wasn't him, it was her.

I like your stories, and I don’t mind the required editing, but it would take your ratings up. I am a male, love your sensitivity. Was upset about the lie about the relationship but understood where they were heading. Good job with the gender/ sexuality confusion theme.

Keep it going. I am a fan.

Cagivagurl, I am a devoted reader of your works, loving the way you depict characters and people growing and loving.

One thing I have noticed in recent stories is a tendency for a comma to sneak in between the subject and verb in sentences quite often. Could you ask your editor to be a bit more careful with punctuation.

Thanks for your stories and please keep writing.

I did enjoy the story; but I do think you need an editor/proof-reader. The grammar/spelling/missing wrods issues detracted from the overall result

Who needs an editor? Simply download the 'Grammarly' free extension and you're golden.

Another well done story we all knew where it was going but it was so well written we just enjoyed the ride. Well done.