All Comments on 'New Roommate Pt. 01'

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APL32APL32about 5 years ago
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Oh my fucking god. This shit is so good and I need more v v soon. Please and thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Thank you , next !

Loved it when will we get the 2nd chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I need the next part of this story!

Almost as bad as I need to cum right now

ThatoneKaoruThatoneKaoruabout 5 years ago
What a gift!

A story plot as sexy as its grammar. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great writing

Restrained, focused, hot. Very good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please continue!

That was great. Please keep writing!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 5 years ago
Wow!

Excellent story so far, I can't wait for part 2! Thanks for sharing it with us!

macktoshmacktoshabout 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is coming

Thank you all very much for the comments, I appreciate the kind words! They motivated me to write Part 2, which will be posted as soon as it's approved.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 4 years ago

brilliant. It was fast-paced, and needy, just like Abby. Abby wants. Jessica wants more, and will probably get it.

I hope you write more (more, more, more) about this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Omg i know how she feels ever since i found out that rubbing my clit felt so good i couldnt stop it sometimes just having to excuse myself and go to toilets and get myself off. Somedays its once or twice others its a lot more and iv ended up naked in lots of strange places playing with all of my body imagining every fantasy possible some of which i am ashamed of but they seem to be the ones that get me off best. My favoirite one is so shocking i wouldnt tell anyone about it but it involves me being naked tied to a low stool on all fours and lube applied to me as im blindfolded and told a bitch on heat needs to be taken to stud ill let you figure out the rest but all i have on is a collar and a leash around my neck. My name is Claire and im always horny xxx

kittenbritcheskittenbritchesover 2 years ago

Your story is so very sweet and as adorable as Abby. I'm looking forward to more goodies.

kittenbritcheskittenbritchesover 2 years ago

Your story is so sweet and as adorable as Abby. I'm looking forward to more goodies.

NewEroticaWriterNewEroticaWriterover 1 year ago

Loved it. Very nice. More would be even better lol.

briboy69briboy699 months ago

This is so good. I am off to read part 2 now! Thank you

MickyDNYMickyDNY8 months ago

What a beautiful story! Thanks for sharing!

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