by angellz
I have the second part written but I have to go over it to correct mistakes and maybe make some changes. Even though I do this for every story I leave mistakes for which I apologize. Either way, the second part will be posted by next week.
Dude get an editor, this is so poorly written it is hard to follow. Just awful.
Angellz - thank you for the warning. More authors should be this considerate .