All Comments on 'New Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Sweet baby Jesus please do more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thanks

for the heads up

angellzangellzover 3 years agoAuthor
There will be one more

I have the second part written but I have to go over it to correct mistakes and maybe make some changes. Even though I do this for every story I leave mistakes for which I apologize. Either way, the second part will be posted by next week.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Dude get an editor, this is so poorly written it is hard to follow. Just awful.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Sorry I could not read this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting

Not my usual cup of tea, but I’m waiting for more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thank you

Angellz - thank you for the warning. More authors should be this considerate .

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