by SlyAngel
Really wish you'd have time to continue this. It doesn't necessarily have to be dozens of chapters long with all possible kinds of turns in the plot - we just want to know how they get together!
This story has so much potential. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and want to know what happens next when she sits down next to the wolf, but I can't if you don't post chapter 2. Please I'm dying here, the suspense is killing me. ;) Please update. :)
We've been waiting since February, when you last commented for chapter 2. Six months is a long time to wait. Please hurry. :)
So I've been away for awhile, as life can do, but now I'm back. :D I find myself with random bouts of time on my hands so when I got the e-mail from a reader yesterday it reminded me that I had this story here. Well, I have a page written down on paper as of my adding this comment and I will be working on adding at least a few more before typing it up and posting it. Thank you all for your patience.
Sincerely,
SlyAngel
HI there have just read this chapter as you cant just leave it there so please posted more even if it just to tell us what happend when she sat down ???
you go back and forth and it weakens the narrative. Also watch your first transition from her perspective to his. It's jolting. Good start, good luck, keep writing.
Good first story. I'd offer encouragement or criticism if I thought it would help. But, you seem to have the intro down. Don't feel too pressured to put cheap sex in every story. From what I've seen, most of the best stories on this site are actual stories.
Just take a deep breath, hold still for a moment, and do what you want to do.
Why must authors always end their stories with this.. I can't even call this a cliffhanger because we already know what's going to happen. Please finish this one.
Great beginning g. Please make ur chapters a bit longer though. I love how you started this. Very good
Please keep this story going it sounds like its going to be wonderful :) YDKM