All Comments on 'New Twins in Town Pt. 01, Ch. 01'

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cliquegge about 2 months ago

Nice - liking the build up - thank you

1_Inquiring_mind about 2 months ago

Great start

Anonymousabout 2 months ago

thanks for sharing...great start.

Anonymousabout 2 months ago

Good first submission. Leaving it on a cliffhanger was great! Can't wait for the next submission.

Anonymousabout 2 months ago

Great start. I've been checking every day for the next chapter.

Brasskitty about 1 month ago

Great, please continue. Every day I have a look, if there is the next part....

BlueBran about 1 month ago

Curious to see where this goes. So far it really doesn’t have much to do with NGIT at all, and you’d barely know it was the same universe as New Girl. Very promising and well written. Looking forward to reading more!

KachinaDoll 28 days ago

Sorry but I found the italics so irritating that I gave up after the first page.

Anonymous7 days ago

So, 11 years after Jake and Jessica graduated?

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Update April 28, 2024 Chapter 3 for NTIT submitted. Chapter 4 is still scheduled for release at the end of May. However, at the moment it's word count is about half of what the other chapters have been. Unless the Beta Readers and I come up with a way to get it closer to 10K, ...

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