by AuroraAccident
Looking forward to seeing what Sar-Bear has been up to in these last ten years now that you’ve mentioned her! The only gripe I have at this point isn’t even a gripe, but if it’s a small town, the students should all know each other very well by now (save for Miles and Zoe). Not in a “oh yea we had math together last year I know you” but a “yea we’ve spent 8 hours a day together every year for the last 12 years” way. Like new comers are walking into a close knit group of sorts. I had 142 students in my graduating class, so it was really small, but even then we we all VERY familiar with each other, as well as upper and lower class men too. Other than that, I’m really liking the story and can’t wait to see where it goes! Hopefully Miles and Zoe can find meaningful monogamous relationships to build off and grow. 5 stars
Please consider posting more quickly between chapters. Besides the awful last chapter of NGIT that was way too long and took forever to post, it was very frustrating waiting for the story to post. If your plan is still to post once a month and that's it, I'm sure there will be many readers that are just going to lose interest and give up on the story..