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All Comments on 'New Wife, Old Lover: Ancient Gods'

by 1fastguy

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lujon2019lujon2019over 2 years ago

How is this LW?

No cheating, no extras

pepepilotpepepilotover 2 years ago

It was a very poor and rushed ending, but it was a good story to that point.

northstanderrhinonorthstanderrhinoover 2 years ago

Average...perhaps a second chapter might be in order to develop the characters.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

You ran out of steam, or just lost interest.

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My stories often spin off from happenings in my own life, or else reflect my curiosity about a range of things. I like a story with some underlying factual content. It should be about 'something', even if most of the tale is simply sexual fantasy. .