by gravitron
god i wish this could happen to me, i would love to become a shemale ❤️❤️❤️❤️
A good story start with the bar scene and kidnapping. The basement scene showed some of the un-named protagonist's thoughts & feelings, which made is easier to make a connection with him. I thought there would be more thoughts, feelings & reflections upon what had happened and what he thought of as options. But no. Just a series of suggestions from a series of men with big dicks. And no thoughts or curiosity or any reactions at all. Not even the thought that it was odd to not have any reactions to this new lifestyle. I think adding this kind of detail would make your characters even more relatable and the scenes easier to get into.
Having said all that, the story is still a good one. Hope you write more.
Very interesting story that could be explained should the writer so desire. 💋
Veronica