All Comments on 'New York Love Affair'

by GuadalupeCalderon

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ambush184ambush184over 12 years ago
A different kind of story...

and I kinda like where it might head, assuming this isn't the only chapter. This has real potential to become a highly rated story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I loved it...

This was really beautiful... please continue the story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

please please please continue the story it is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More!!!

This story has really great potential and it pulls you in and now I can't wait for the next chapter!

GuadalupeCalderonGuadalupeCalderonabout 12 years agoAuthor
Coming soon

Thanks for all of the positive feedback. I am going to carry out with a part two, but havent had time to thoroughly work on it quite yet.Once again thanks for those who emailed me and left a comment. This is my very first submission, and I appreciate everyones optimism. --GC

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Really enjoyed this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent

Great and well paced. Two likeable characters in John, and Reina hope to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Shirt

He tore his shirt off to display his tattoos. A short while later he unbuttoned his shirt. Did he put it back on & button it up in between?

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