by GuadalupeCalderon
and I kinda like where it might head, assuming this isn't the only chapter. This has real potential to become a highly rated story.
This story has really great potential and it pulls you in and now I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for all of the positive feedback. I am going to carry out with a part two, but havent had time to thoroughly work on it quite yet.Once again thanks for those who emailed me and left a comment. This is my very first submission, and I appreciate everyones optimism. --GC
Great and well paced. Two likeable characters in John, and Reina hope to see more!
He tore his shirt off to display his tattoos. A short while later he unbuttoned his shirt. Did he put it back on & button it up in between?