All Comments on 'Newlywed Whore Pt. 02'

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Ninepin4uNinepin4uabout 6 years ago
Slut

A slut on her way to becoming a good sex toy.

Swinglife13Swinglife13about 6 years ago
Slut Wife

As you said people have negative crap say, and the truth is someone will always dig on others if it is something they don’t agree with. Forget them, they need to understand just because they don’t like something doesn’t make it wrong.

The story line to date is great. Keep up the great work.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gosh this story is so pathetic stupid nonsense wimp. 1* for this crap

The writer must be a freaking retard to write something so stupid nonsense like this trash story.

This story is complete trash and waste of time....and it made me waste 5 minutes of my time.

Please don't write trash story anymore.... it's offensive to human intelligence.

1* for this lame.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
how about on our honeymoon?

After 3 days of none stop sexual activity, I needed a break. My new wife wanted to take a nap and I wanted to take a long walk on the beach. About a mile into my walk a rather beautiful, but clearly stoned, woman asked me for a light. She was holding a joint, right out in the open. I got her to show me where she was staying and I got her off the beach. In her room she lite up and laid back on the bed to smoke. I took advantage of a situation and ate her pussy. I then fucked her. She soon was sleeping and I left.

I saw what I assume was her husband enter her room as I was headed done the stairs. I always wondered what happened when he saw her pussy and ass leaking my cum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Slut Wife

To me his was a hot story, probably because I have a slut wife alsol I knew she had alot of guys before we were married and always likes to flirt. I had always read Penthouse letters about girls taking on multiple guys and that really turned me on. However when I would bring up the topic to Elaine she would always tell me I as all she needed. This all took place in the late 70's

About two years into our marriage we went through a rough financial period. She worked at a dental office and had confided to her boss of some of our struggles. Unknown to her he talked to one of his friends named Jim, also a patient, that Elaine might need some financial help. He arranged at late appointment the following week and as they were leaving he approached her and asked her to meet him for a drink, which she excepted. At the bar he told her he needed a hostess for an upcoming all mens party and told her she would just need to dress sexy and serve drinks. She told Jim she would need to check with her husband. When she told me I said sounds like a good deal, but told her you know they will want more....she laughed and said all of these guys were in their 50's and I wouldn't need to worry

Anyway the following Fri night she dressed up in her stockings, high heels, a short dress and a sheer blouse. I knew she was dressed to tease. When she arrived at the party there was Jim and three other guys.....Every round of drinks she was to remove a piece of clothing.....They all fondled her and helped her till she was just in stockings and heels.....Then she all ravished her....she ended up fucking all 4 of them and came home totally used, covered in hickies and cum, but proudly showing me the $400 she had "made".. I called her a hot slut and told her to suck me which she immediately did...then I fucked her harder than I ever had before

She did these parties about every two or three months for over three years with Jim, sometimes hosting up to about 8 older guys, a mixture of contractors, bankers and doctors in town, almost all but Jim were married. It made me hard knowing she was the slut in Jim's circle....she was there for their pleasure ....it was hot seeing her come home, well used, with lots of money in her garter and ready for the hard fucking she knew I was going to give Jim's Slut.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 6 years ago
I liked it and want more

Forget detractors, write, write, write and it will all work out xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Like with every other person place things

Write for your own pleasure Like with so many things I read for mood now I know what I am thinking What he thinks is another opinion. And there will be 1000 other opinions Som like me enjoy Just for the entertainment and does it make me say have a good day

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Newlywed Whore

Forget the other comments. If you like cuckold stories (which I do) then this is a good story. A lot of us do like slutty wives, my blonde white wife included. I mean, when your wife fucks & sucks her white UNCLE + a lot of his (mostly black) friends, I guess she would qualify as a whore wife. Keep up the good work for us cuckies!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
mmm

liked it but would have been better if the hubby had pissed all over after he come, get her used to her new life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A cuckold likes cuckold crap?? Astonishing!!!

Cuckolds are mental ill persons which need psychological therapy and not a sick fantasy written by a unscrupulous author whose only intention is to write about his pervert fantasy!

funandboldfunandboldabout 6 years ago
Wow...great story...HOT and very well written.

I have written and posted many stories on other sites...

Now I have to admit, I've never had near 20,000 people read one chapter in less than a week so I guess you get a lot of traffic, but the comments are terrible.

I guess you can consider yourself a great writer when people mistake fantasy for reality...

People...you have NO idea how much time, not to mention blood, sweat and tears writers put into their work...to have total strangers FLAME them and rip them apart because a character who is described in the title as a who, turns out to be a WHORE! People, this is fantasy and fiction...and unless you have someone standing behind you with a gun...STOP reading if you don't like the story...sheesh...there are thousands of stories on here...find one you do like!

The writer has done a great job on this! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
good one!

I liked the series.

kirstymiakirstymiaover 4 years ago
Loving this story

Thanks for another amazing part of Newlywed Whore. Wish I was the wife :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fuck yeah

Soo hot

Loved it especially when her husband fucks her

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Total garbage came three times. I hate you. ;-)

NoneroticNoneroticabout 1 month ago

Keep up the details buddy.... Nice writing

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