All Comments on 'Newlyweds New Desires Ch. 01'

Amazing, well done! Keep the story going.

It will happen

Loved it! Just long enough with sufficient description.

"Can't a girl just want to fuck his husband?" His husband? Your story is hot, but for this, and too many other errors (especially punctuation), please find an editor/proofreader. Thanks!

There were a few typos but otherwise well written. One of the more realistic examples of how wife sharing gets started. Brought back fun memories.

Yes I can't wait for the next part to find out how they go about getting Clayton to come to their house so his wife can feel how big Clayton is and hopefully she and Clayton end up fucking, how long until the next part is ready?

written well and ending with a tease. It is LW category and I see the cuck tag (thank you) so I know where this is going. Just please don't do the humiliation thing. Let her enjoy Clayton if you must but don't have Clayton or her bad mouth this guy and don't have her keep seeing Clayton. Make it a once and done if you must.

Great lead-up! Don't let any negative voting from the misogynistic trolls deter you!

Thanks for all the feedback! I have a basic outline for the next chapter done. I've set a goal for myself to at least get 1 chapter out a month. So hopefully the wait isn't too long for you all :)

Pretty intense and I’m not a swapping person in real life but a hot story is a hot story.. looking for the new chaps but do hope this doesn’t become an obsessed wife for his drug cock while they abuse hubby but just a hot one off

A group was away many years ago everyone was off the charts out of it and it was a beach flop house type of trip with three couples a few guys and girls either single or without their significant other . On a particular crazy night one of the couples were fucking in the room with door open and two guys went in as he pounded his future wife from behind and the guys pulled out being close to her face he looked at her face and said open up that mouth slut and she did and he put his dick in spit roasting her with her boyfriend telling his destroy your girls pussy bro. He unloaded in her mouth and the boyfriend in her pussy but the other guy as they fell exhausted on mattress just slid between her legs and fucked her which put the rest of the night into a viagra filled threee on one fucking . Waking the next afternoon hung over you had a mortified girlfriend and an embarrassed shocked boyfriend. The guys were hey no big deal we were wrecked but one joked I alway wondered what it would be like to fuck your ass and it was the greatest . The next two nights were ofgies with the three couples, the friends and a few others they met on the beach bars . I remember saying that they don’t know how he married her and the other two couples stayed together because all the girls in that house fucked every guy that they knew and didn’t know those theee nights . The one black dude they didn’t know but came along said as he finished in one girls mouth and face there’s nothing better than face fucking some hot white bitch gagging her with her first black cock then cumming in her mouth and all over her face as you look into her eyes as you dominate her . He only got one of the girlfriends and one of the other girls who boyfriend couldn’t make it . Funny guy he was

Well done, well developed and a great start to this story. Off to read the next chapter. Cheers