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by tarnished_knight

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hot

In fact it's very hot. I hope you'll continue with this one.

marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Super Hot!!!

That was a good story that you wrote about the author picking up the 21-year-old when he was 58. The sex was good and somewhat unbelievable at times.

jiskittenjiskittenabout 13 years ago
Oooh...

I am SO signing up for the next writers conference!

bat1800bat1800over 11 years ago
Damn

This was great you actually made me laugh too ...Well Done ;)

choosemechoosemeover 11 years ago
EXCITING AND EROTIC....GOOD TIMING!

Nice attention to detail in your descriptions. Set a nice pace building the connection.

This line fed my senses...I moved my hand back to her bare thigh and immediately thought I detected a slight opening of her legs.

I thought I could detect a change, ever so slight..

Excellent writing...

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