by tarnished_knight
That was a good story that you wrote about the author picking up the 21-year-old when he was 58. The sex was good and somewhat unbelievable at times.
Nice attention to detail in your descriptions. Set a nice pace building the connection.
This line fed my senses...I moved my hand back to her bare thigh and immediately thought I detected a slight opening of her legs.
I thought I could detect a change, ever so slight..
Excellent writing...