- Mind Control
- NewU Pt. 10a
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To be continued...
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Yup, as you may have guessed from the name of this chapter, this is the end of NewU pt10... (a)
That's right, there is still a lot more to get through and still so much more for our hapless hero to experience on this auspicious evening. But with a desire to keep to some sort of schedule, not to mention a vague attempt to keep my chapters at a roughly consistent size. I have decided to split this one into two parts in order to tell the story properly.
As I have mentioned before, this is the first chapter in what we can call the second 'book' of the NewU series and the story will be taking a very different path than it has done before now. But more about that will be revealed in the final part of this chapter. Those of you who have left comments applauding the story-over-sex qualities of my work will not be disappointed and many of the small, seemingly insignificant details that have been given throughout the first book will start to become more important.
It is a journey I am very much looking forward to taking you on.
As always, please feel free to leave your comments on the story, us authors do thrive on feedback.
Thank you all for your continued support of the NewU series. It would never have survived its infancy without you and I can only hope you continue to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Lit has the best and most supportive reader's community that I know of. You are all awesome.
Nova.
- COMMENTS
Clearmuse13 days agoAlso slightly worried Faye could end up as a plot device, given the speed she's brought in without really getting to know her, just being told she's ultra important. Gonna be sad if she's killed off too spur the main character, but not because she's someone I know and love. Rather because it was her reason for existing.
Clearmuse13 days agoEnjoying the story.
Still fairly Mary Sueperman, and every relationship being the best thing that ever happened makes each one a little less special. Could be fine if they were all great but different, but they each seem like they should supercede all previous ones. Evelyn's felt like that, apparently she's barely worth mentioning these days. Instant unique emotional connection reduced to "experiment". Forming a sub harem with Becky and Philipa could have been a huge start to something, but feels almost irrelevant now.
Aussie19513 months agoGreat storyline BUT confusing, every woman he seems to meet is his one and only. WTF. Does this mean that he gives up his sub and guess ( the two nurses ) as well as Olivia and the others.Fuck me what an idiot if he does. More importantly Charlotte ( who I feel sorry for) is on opposing sides to Faye. You seem to be adding more and more female characters to is story as you go along but NO answers on how he’s dealing or going to deal with his relationships with these women . Clearly this guy doesn’t know what the hell he doing..
6HourDude5 months agoThis is so incredible! I stayed up to almost 3 am and fell asleep only because I physically couldn’t keep my eyes open any longer. I want to ration it to a page a day because I truly dread the day I finishe the book! At 3 am last night I finished chapter 9, believing the story couldn’t possibly get better. And then it did!!! 10a is unbelievable. Simply an incredible story. You must be a famous writer in the “real” world, and I simply must read everything you’ve ever written, or will write in the future!
Sparkyblueone11 months agoI am loving this story. I’m looking forward to reading the rest. There have been few stories on Lit that have gripped me like this one. Excellent. 5*
