All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 14'

Fuck fuck fuck! You have that annoying cliffhanger thing down to an art. I have never seen anyone do it better and it annoys the hell out of me because I always get so wrapped up in your writing that I forget to expect it and then I get slapped in the face again. Another impressive chapter as they all have been and you build things up so brilliantly that I can’t believe you aren’t a professional author. As always, my thanks for putting all the work into this and posting it because it truly is something I always look forward to.

Be well and stay safe.

J.D.

As with the island I hate you.

😂 😂 😂

I just get sucked into the story and it's sorry check back next week

Mire questions than answers and an awesome ending. Cannot wait for next instalment but will have to. 😃😃😃.

5 ⛤

Amazing!!! The plot is so unique and the characters are so interesting…I guess I will continue my daily checks for updates 😁

Good grief, only reason emperor decided to surrender, against the advice of his advisors, was because of the nukes. It was his decision.

I agree with the other comment this is so unique I just love it please keep this going it’s story needs telling.

Part of what I liked about this story was the length of the chapters but now they seem to be shorter and shorter - good story - very original - my only complaint is the length of the updates

Ok Nova, Its time to break out the Provigil or Adderall!!! You can't leave me hanging like this! Loving the story. No more sleep! I need to know what happens next to Pete, and what the Voice on the island is really up to!!!

The waiting is killing me.....

Love the stories, keep up the good work1

Really enjoying the story, was so glad when the regular updates started again, thank you.

AHHHHH! How could you end it like that😃😃 Such a cliff hanger. Oh I'm on the edge of my seat here and can't wait for the next chapter

tbh you should put this on royal road for money or something....

Interesting how you weaved history into this and it's influence. Made me laugh

You have me on the ‘edge of my seat’ in anticipation of each segment from your fertile mind. I’m loving the inter-weaving of history into the story. Exceptional story telling. Thank you.

Duuuuuuude. The freakin cliffhangers you come up with! Each one is different, delicious, and ...and, agonizing!

I knew it!!! I was expecting Pete to find out that, while physically gone, his love was still there with him in the dreamscape! Thank you for that, expected, plot twist!