All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 15'

Excellent buildup. Please keep it going.

This series is keeping me on the edge of my seat, waiting for the release of the next chapter. It is extremely well written (as is all of Nova’s (a.k.a. TheNovalist)). I’d recommend this author to anyone.

This just gets more confusing as things move along. I hope realizing that his bonded love is sort of alive kinda doesn’t distract his rage because that was about all he had going for him. He is sometimes just too friendly and logical while choosing to try and talk things out instead of fighting and with people like these, that only gets you killed faster. Excellent job as always and I look forward to your next chapter…as always. 😏

Oh this is hosting up quickly who to trust ? I hope Pete goes in fists flying when he finds the first conclave traitor smashes his/her mind to bits whilst ripping out who else is a traitor. I’m really happy Fiona is still there to help Pete and show him the love he deserves after living threw his horrible family I just hope he finds another to bond with eventually.

Excellent, love how it's moving forward but ever special slowly and with twists and turns everywhere.

Another great story! Liking the twists and turns.

The only thing bothering me is still the weird blend of Americanisms and Britishness. “Bills” and “diner” just aren’t words we use over here, as an example. Equally, I don’t know if you’re British or not, but the vast majority of restaurants I’ve ever been in involve you paying without ever leaving the table: it’s tipping that isn’t common practice, because we actually pay proper wages ;)

i dont throw this around lightly: this needs to be a pornhwa

I must say you really have me at this point. I have idea where things are going next but cannot wait to find out.

You should publish this. A guy named Elliott Kay made the jump from this site to publishing his stuff on Smashwords and then Amazon. You could too. I think it could use some polish, but you're doing some great sci-fi here. I would spend money on it.

I really love this series and am waiting to see where you take it - you have foreshadowed a number of thing ie the wind in this city and a number of other items - really looking forward to seeing it come together.

I’m still just so heartbroken over Faye! I was so happy for him when he met her. Not even one night to physically consummate their bond, at least not yet, and never while both were alive... but the fact that I feel so much for the characters is I must admit, testimony to how well drawn they are.