All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 28'

Ohhhh it’s getting good now lol not that it’s been bad or anything but I can see a war approaching asap and I can’t wait to read it all.

Marvelous. Glad to see this story get another chapter. Hope they can eventually heal Phillippa, just not so quick it loses meaning.

Why are the sidebar bits acting like this is part of The Island?

Awesome story! Thank you for yet another chapter!

Great stuff (if rather short).

Still a very good story and well written but would prefer longer chapters as they were earlier in the series....

Also noticed the mucked up links for the wrong story ...?????

At the moment, lurching from one crisis to another. Poor Philippa, can she be saved?

This is more than just a story, it's an epic. At this point if anyone reads it and wants to whine about no sex, well too bad. The story is way bigger than that.

You been busy? Each release used to be much longer, and released more frequently. :(

Love the update but between the chapters I am seriously forgetting who is who, who does what and what factions everyone one is in, and even what the factions are.

Can you share what is happening in your real life? Your writing has slowed significantly…

Caught up. The question on my mind is about the dozen Evo's in vegetative states. Can he restore any of them with what he took from Stirling? If not, could he install Faye in one of them?

It is a book you cannot put down

This is a great story with out a doubt but only getting a 5 minute read every 4 to 6 weeks is beginning to cause a loss of interest - this story started with chapters that were 5 - 6 - 7 pages long and some even longer and were worth waiting for but now - not so much