All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 32'

Fantastic chapter

Thank, i've been read this tale from the begining

This is a great story! Thank you for posting

Great stuff - loving it :)

Many thanks.

Another excellent instalment. I haven't a clue who the traitor is?

Love the adaption into current events...

I've read every chapter so far, and I'm not going to stop now. This is another good one.

very good giv me more

5 star story all the way!

Very good, but Marco leaves a lot of loose ends....?

Amazing story. Not always about sex but the route of sorry that keeps you wanting to read the next chapter.

You are the author so you decide but I a curious why you chose to include Ukraine. Good story though.

Wait… so he can make shields for others?

I can’t lie, every chapter I’m starting to notice things that make this feel a little half assed. It’s good, well written, but not well explained.

Shields for others are a thing? Wouldn’t that have been just so useful to put one between Becky and the bomb eh? Or was that plot armor not needed there cause it made for a better story?

Like that.