All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 37'

Fucking Marco

So gripping but oh so short. 5⛤ easily.

Well you could see that coming a mile of.....

4* this time...the story went well through about 30 chapters, but this was obvious from miles away and drawing it out like this is becoming tedious. The wrap up with Uri was needed but could've happened 3 chapters ago. Ditch the fillers,

This was good. Not every reveal needs to a sudden hammer to the face.

I agree with AZslyder that it feels needlessly drawn-out, at least her on Lit, but I'm not sure if it would feel that way if it was a book that didn't have weeks or months between chapters.

Still, excellent writing, as always, and enjoyable read.

inno0cent_bystander - that's exactly what I said! Fucking Marco!

Now that all that has finally been revealed. What is Pete gonna do about it? Does he keep Olena safe during this?

Can't wait to find out!

One of the best stories on this site for sure. I am eagerly awaiting more of this great storyline and must say what a good job you are doing. It seems that my patience is rewarded every time a new chapter is posted. This world you’ve imagined with it’s magical interior mental cityscapes is one I will truly miss when your story finally must conclude. 5/5 stars sir!

Nail biter cliffhanger! Again!

Well done... speed up pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Really liking this story

You have a compelling writing technique that you use to extensive. Why did they have to go to Ukraine to find a resolution?

Another great chapter. It was time for Pete to evolve again, because he wasn't going to get anywhere the way he was. It was just going to turn him into an inhuman monster. It felt like he was wandering aimlessly because he was, deliberately. Now the next phase starts.

Just keep it coming...I like the background and don't find it tedious at all..Marco wasn't too big a surprise but is there still a man behind the curtain. 5/5

Excelent stufrf again. Loving this series. Keep up the great work :

Not a huge suprise who it was.... but still really enjoying the whole story line and the detail you manage to build into it all.

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

Sooooo obvious it was his bogus mentor. Hopefully next chapter soon

So glad you are back. I was beginning to worry.

Very goo very good! Please keep em coming good sir!

It was so obvious several chapters ago it was Marco. I kept wondering where this was going and why Pete couldn't see the possibility. The idea of him being corrupted never crossed my mind, and obviously didn't cross his either. Well played and planned. His rush to see Pete after his awakening and them never following up now makes perfect sense. You have planned out this story and the plot very well.